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I was wondering if anyone would be interested in creating a story I came up with. The link to the Google Docs file is down below.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1r5A ... sp=sharing

Interessting idea, i hope someone with enough csc can make it.

Anyhow, there is something strange for me in first lines:
"She’s out of town [...] She’s been out of the house a lot lately" + " I can smoke weed wherever and whenever I want"
It seems she has often the house for herself
But with next line: "I can’t with [....] in the house fucking like rabbits", it seems quite the opposite.
So what is the truth: does she or doesn't she have the house for herself ?
I think, first line should be change to something like "at first she was out of the house, but now, they stay in her bedroom all the time".

I guess I didn't think of that. Thanks for bringing it to my attention.

I wish I could make the story myself, but Unity just looks too complicated for me. Besides, like I said in my introduction to this forum, I'm more of an idea man. In the words of Jerry Springer, "Until next time, take care of yourself and each other."

Try to reach Kevin1995, puffdip or chimneyfish. Maybe one of them could be interested to have a scenarist.

I'll contact one of them. By the way, I fixed the discrepancies you mentioned. To quote George Carlin, "Toodle-oo, go with God, and don't take any wooden nickels."