[Complete] The Drink [0.14.4]

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Kevahu
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[Complete] The Drink [0.14.4]

Post by Kevahu » Sat Aug 24, 2019 2:27 pm

Story Line
If you don't know what to do

You came home from a long day of work. And want to say hi to Amy.

Be careful because you're clumsy and already forgot where your key is (Search the spare key).

With the spare key are you able to get inside, but inside are many possibilities to lose your clothes.

If you want to go upstairs, you'll first have to put the bag that (should) be on the ground, in the right kitchen cabinet.

Like I said, you are a clumsy person that of course let's a bottle fall out of the bag while putting it in the cabinet.
And you are even stupid enough to drink from it (You need to drink it to go on with the story).

When you pick up the phone you'll see a text from Amy that tells you about the bottle, and why you shouldn't drink it.

It didn't tell about the side effects the drink has but you'll experience it. When the side effect has ran out, you (should) be outside without clothes (If you haven't already lost them ;) ).

Find a way inside, and search for your clothes (You must search at least 6 places to continue the story. Upstairs in the washer, Downstairs in the toilet, In the trash can, Inside the left kitchen cabinet, Inside the orange bin in the garage, The kitchen sink and Downstairs the left desk drawer).

While you are looking for your clothes, will Amy roam around. If she sees you (Before you searched 6 places) is it game over.

If Amy is standing just where you want to be, and can't wait, are you able to move her in the "Y" menu.

When you searched enough, she will come to talk to you. Just do what she asks and follow her around a bit, and you'll get to the end.

Tips

You don't need to put you shoes away, clean your pants, go to the toilet or clean your shirt. Only if you want to.

Bugs

- "Test Dialogue" action in "Y" menu. (Fixed)
This was used for me to... Test the dialogue

- An opportunity to open doors after drinking, and before taking the phone. (Fixed)

- Clothing states doesn't save/load. (Fixed in most situations, if there is one place where it doesn't save/load it, please report it)

- Amy's sexual act starts when laying on the bed. (Fixed, without the need of a language update)

Disclaimer

English isn't my first language, and this is the first story I made.
Any bugs, suggestions or corrections are appreciated!
Attachments
The Drink.zip
The Story Files Version 1.1
(51.15 KiB) Downloaded 1043 times
The Drink-nl.zip
Dutch translation by Kevahu Version 1
(7.5 KiB) Downloaded 51 times
The Drink-fr.zip
French translation by ttant Version 1
(7.99 KiB) Downloaded 101 times
Last edited by Kevahu on Sun Sep 01, 2019 10:30 am, edited 13 times in total.

ttant
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Re: [Complete] The Drink [0.14.4]

Post by ttant » Sat Aug 24, 2019 4:00 pm

There is two story file in your archive. I guess the "original story.story" file should be deleted.
You may also clean your story for all unnecessary files and dialog. It seems you kept all the original story stuff when you did your CS.
Maybe peter980 or mada7 can tell you how to clean it properly.

Kevahu
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Re: [Complete] The Drink [0.14.4]

Post by Kevahu » Sat Aug 24, 2019 5:00 pm

Yeah, when I was creating this story, did I look for some things in the original story. And I remember exporting it in the wrong folder... I will clean it up and re-upload.
Thanks for letting me know.

peter980
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Re: [Complete] The Drink [0.14.4]

Post by peter980 » Sat Aug 24, 2019 5:06 pm

Since story has interactions only with Amy character, probably only Drink story file and Amy character files are needed to play.

Bug:
Action wheel on player shows something called "Test Dialogue".

Bug2:
You can drink from bottle without finding phone. This unlocks all the rooms.
The quests tells you to go to Amy and when you arrive to study naked nothing happens.

Major bug:
You have not implemented saving status of player clothes. So save/load will bring back all clothes on.
If you want to do this, track losing each piece of clothes with variables, and then on game load modify player clothing to match that.

Kevahu
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Re: [Complete] The Drink [0.14.4]

Post by Kevahu » Sat Aug 24, 2019 5:37 pm

I will look into it, when I have more time... But the file is cleaner now.

ttant
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Re: [Complete] The Drink [0.14.4]

Post by ttant » Sun Aug 25, 2019 5:18 am

French translation added to first post (and updated).

Kevahu
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Re: [Complete] The Drink [0.14.4]

Post by Kevahu » Sun Aug 25, 2019 7:57 am

Thank you for the translation!
I had to make some changes because of what has changed in the latest update.

ttant
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Re: [Complete] The Drink [0.14.4]

Post by ttant » Sun Aug 25, 2019 1:49 pm

In such case, don't forget to put a version number on the zip file (not in the story / csc).

Edit: updated french translation to match last changes

chimneyfish
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Re: [Complete] The Drink [0.14.4]

Post by chimneyfish » Sat Aug 31, 2019 8:15 pm

Bug: while Amy was using the bathroom, I lay down on the bed. This warped the player to the bathroom having 69 with Amy earlier than intended. And because the player's penis wasn't out we were stuck that way. Had to restart.

Kevahu
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Re: [Complete] The Drink [0.14.4]

Post by Kevahu » Sun Sep 01, 2019 2:50 am

I'll look in to it!

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