[UPDATED][Complete Story] A man with a dream [0.8.3]

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evilbefall
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Re: [UPDATED][Complete Story] A man with a dream [0.8.3]

Postby evilbefall » Thu Jan 11, 2018 9:47 pm

great story looking forward to updates and maybe add new girls in future if game updates add more girls btw erasmus are there coming new girls or are there ideas for it ?

LLLeon2017
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Re: [UPDATED][Complete Story] A man with a dream [0.8.3]

Postby LLLeon2017 » Fri Jan 12, 2018 1:05 am

No brick walls or dead ends...

Probably more distracted because I didn't go far enough with responses or I didn't realize
I needed to give the NPC something (where give was appropriate)

Just plain stupified at how fun the game was heading and supprised at some of the paths
you put in place. Once I figured out where to go with what twat it was all out AlllRightyThen!

I do have one suggestion for the Rachael hiding for the pictures path.. Mabye you should add
a "GIVE" tool to her in a converstion or the action wheel so player can give her the camera??

Seems to me that might be more in line with that story path. Then she could "SHOW" player
the camera and then use the USB Drive and Laptop in the office room to upload the pictures
for sharing and to send them to player's phone, etc.. It will add more game time and fun to
the path in store for Vickie as well with the later path to the party at the story's cresnedo!

Just my pervy mind running amok!!! :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol:

LLLeon2017
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Re: [UPDATED][Complete Story] A man with a dream [0.8.3]

Postby LLLeon2017 » Fri Jan 12, 2018 1:08 am

OH!!! And don't forget the camera HAS to have the SD Card in to complete the path.

Rache should make a comment about... "Oh.. This would be great! IF YOU Put the SD
Card in the damn camera! Pops!"

Or something like that.. :D

LLLeon2017
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Re: [UPDATED][Complete Story] A man with a dream [0.8.3]

Postby LLLeon2017 » Fri Jan 12, 2018 1:19 am

Just downloaded the updated SINGLE file story to give it a run.

Da screwtinney begins!! :lol: :twisted: :lol:

Housepartyhard
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Re: [UPDATED][Complete Story] A man with a dream [0.8.3]

Postby Housepartyhard » Fri Jan 12, 2018 9:34 am

Thanks for the feedback LLLeon, yes the Rachael part with Vickie comes out a little cheap: get a blowjob, talk to Rachael, now you are allowed to have sex with with her with no additional steps by the player because Rachael made the pictures and send them to your invisible phone off screen!!
You got the right idea and indeed the camera and the SD were part of the script for this quest early in "development" but I discarded all that for several reasons actually.
- The most important one is that once I settled for the concept I wanted the story to play out with ZERO item interactions, this would a) be less work for me b) minimize the bugs and the ways other players can break the script and c) allow me to hold players hand all the way to the end so they don't get stuck. You see, I don't trust you guys :) The way I see it this is still a porn game first so the story should TAKE YOU to the porn instead of BLOCK IT unless you meet a series of chores I would randomly set.
- The only exception I made was the give the drugs to Vickie quest because it made sense within the plot and I found super funny her "bombed" facial expression. She being high would also help the latter scene with Britt to be less creepy if instead of being blackmailed into sex (which she is), she also complies because she's wasted and has lost her inhibitions.
- Anyway originally Rachael would have told you that pictures are in the SD after some additional quest is completed, giving the illusion that time has passed and Rachael did download the pictures to the SD and set it up for you, then you give that to Vickie and the Britt scene would be available. The problem is the give command for the SD just refused to work no matter what criteria I wrote around it, the bitch just wouldn't take it. Not sure if it's a problem with the creator or a trigger that I couldn't find conflicted with it but after a while trying to fix it I just decided that 2 additional minutes of gameplay weren't worth of it.
- In the end, why in 2018 would Rachael have to get a digital camera and an SD to take and share pictures? She has her own smartphone, an actual person today would use the phone first! It maybe the only realistic event in the whole mod.

You calling the updated version "single file story" has offended me beyond your comprehension. It's the DEFINITIVE COMPLETE EXPERIENCE GOLD FUCK YOU GIVE ME MONEY EDITION and you WILL call it as such. What the hell is wrong with you people? Fuck.

LLLeon2017
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Re: [UPDATED][Complete Story] A man with a dream [0.8.3]

Postby LLLeon2017 » Fri Jan 12, 2018 8:47 pm

I am so sorry Housepartyhard!!

I never meant any offence! I complement you on your efforts and thinking things out with your story
the way you did. It all makes sense to me now above all else since I personally have no clue how the
story creator works or how the game development process works so clearly I have no reason or right
to critisize so I do not critisize.

I just had a couple of ideas that I thought MIGHT make the game more of a challenge because I am
into games with some challenge. I did not mean it as any form of critisism of your story. In fact. It's
a very fun story for giggles and thrills flat out based on why and how you set it up... The way you've
set the story up and your reasons for it, along with key points about today's technology in the story
line, all make very good reasons for not using the way I was thinking about and apply best to your
story!

As for you taking offense to my comment about single file story... Please forgive me! None meant!!

The single file system was NOT a disrespect of your work. It was just letting you know that I got the
file after the developers upped the specs for custom stories so builders like you could put them up
as single files instead of having to break them into seperate files like you had to do originally.. The
fact of the matter was that I was thanking not only you for reposting it with the updates you added
as a single file but also thanking the developers for being so considerate of all creators out there,
like you, to the point that they are changing site limitations to show their support for your efforts.

It was NEVER meant as any kind of negative input or response! Please forgive me if somehow it was
interpreted as such. I never mean any disrespect to any creator when I post comments about story
action, oopses, or problems with story movement. And I do not mean anything negative by my next
paragraph. I had come to the site to day to let you know I ran into a little oops on my most recent
play which was with the new single file version updated release. I mentioned the 3 file version ONLY
as a comparison to my previous playthrough using that version.

In my multiple play throughs of the 3 part version, before I got the single file version on my last trip
to the site, played through to the orgy (spoiler) with no issues other than my blond moments. With
the single file updated story version it ran very well like the 3 part version with one exception. In it
the one thing I ran into that stumped me was the interaction with Vickie AFTER I had Kat leave the
bedroom and after Rachael had entered the bathroom. It was as if Vickie was still set with Kat in
the room. When I tried to resume our interaction with her I could not get the prompt for continuing
the conversation about what Rachael had told me of Vickie's activities at school so I could get the
prompts for the pot/joint and the pills. In attempts to reset her for this conversation I tried leaving
the room and re-entering it as well as a number of other actions but after 6 or more tries all that I
got was the "see you later" type response to give her about her "what's up daddy" type line.

I figure that I either missed something or should have responded to her BEFORE I sent Kat out of the
room or something about how Rachael entered the room and stopped before entering the bathroom
may have disabled the trigger for the story line to continue so I was going to let you know in case it
is something in the coding you might need to look at. Or to see if you have an idea of what step I've
missed or taken too far for this interaction.

Again. I am sorry if you took any of my input or comments in my previous post, or if you may take any
in this post, because NO offense, or negative input, is intended! I like and enjoy the free reigns of the
story you created and I appreciate all the effort you clearly put into your product! It is Great Work!

I believe you have a lot of potential for many more stories to come with an unlimited range of goals!
Thank you for your effort and for your consideration of player's input and comments. Please do not
take comments that may not be worded well in offense by default. Please check with the poster of
the comment you are unsure about first so, as I am trying to do, they can at least try to clear up any
missunderstanding of what they where trying to say.

Thank you again for the great story and all the thought and effort you put into it. Again. Keep it up!!
Please!

LLLeon2017
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Re: [UPDATED][Complete Story] A man with a dream [0.8.3]

Postby LLLeon2017 » Fri Jan 12, 2018 9:12 pm

LLLeon2017 wrote:Just downloaded the updated SINGLE file story to give it a run.

Da screwtinney begins!! :lol: :twisted: :lol:


Please note!
The screwtinney comment was a friendly kibbits about how players try out and push
the envelope on story creator's works here as seen in many friendly reviews and posts
about their experiences with that creator's work.

It is NOT meant as any kind of disrespect or belittlement of your work or efforts.

Had it been meant as any kind of SERIOUS comment the wording would not have been
spelt out the corny way it is and it would not have had the Smilies included meaning
it was all in fun.

As for the "SINGLE file" line above it. I explained this in my previous post. It too was
NEVER meant as ANY KIND of disrespect! It was simply referancing the story now being
updated and available as a SINGLE file not THREE files. And it being a good thing since
it was meant as a thank you to both the story creator for updating the story and to the
site moderators/game creators for changing the site limitations so ALL creators will be
able to upload larger story files as ONE file. They showed their support for creators by
doing this.

All users of this site should treat each other with respect and courtesy. To this point
all users should consider a number of facts about forums and comments made by any
number of posters. This game, and this forum, serve multiple countries and languages
so missunderstandings due to rash reactions to odd wording of comments or not taking
time to read all of a comment before assuming any kind of disrespect may be meant
only serves to cause discontent and inappropriate reactions due to missunderstanding
what was actually the intent of the comment.

Please take time, everyone, to read and consider that some postings may not be of
the best choices in wording due to the wide range of country/languages this game
and forum are exposed to. Personal experiences, customs, and terminology can be
missred causing missunderstandings of what the poster actually meant in their post
comment. As happened my post above. No disrespect was meant but the creator of
this story took offense when none was intended and responded rashly because of it.

I again ask for Housepartyhard's forgiveness for any preceived offense as none was
intended by any of my previous comments, especially those quoted above.

Housepartyhard
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Re: [UPDATED][Complete Story] A man with a dream [0.8.3]

Postby Housepartyhard » Sat Jan 13, 2018 12:23 pm

Man, you really make me doubt if you crancked the sarcasm to 9000 or you just posted the best fuck you speech I have ever read, in which case is an honor to have it adressed to me. In both cases... eerrr... you are welcome? Dude you confused me.

LLLeon2017 wrote:In my multiple play throughs of the 3 part version, before I got the single file version on my last trip
to the site, played through to the orgy (spoiler) with no issues other than my blond moments. With
the single file updated story version it ran very well like the 3 part version with one exception. In it
the one thing I ran into that stumped me was the interaction with Vickie AFTER I had Kat leave the
bedroom and after Rachael had entered the bathroom. It was as if Vickie was still set with Kat in
the room. When I tried to resume our interaction with her I could not get the prompt for continuing
the conversation about what Rachael had told me of Vickie's activities at school so I could get the
prompts for the pot/joint and the pills. In attempts to reset her for this conversation I tried leaving
the room and re-entering it as well as a number of other actions but after 6 or more tries all that I
got was the "see you later" type response to give her about her "what's up daddy" type line.


Upon reading this I thought I've messed up in the last update because that scene is were I made a slight change because the line "get Kat out" would only show up once and the player might miss the cue. The trigger for that dialogue is Vickie = Alone with the player and I have replayed it now three times trying to break the script as much as possible but it works as expected. The only way I found to screw it is to complete the ghost hunting quest before talking to Vickie because both Rachael and Kat will be in the master room but I don't think the player would wonder so much off the rails, the reasoning from the player would be "I have a quest to receive a blowjob from a teenager two steps in front of me, better wander around the opposite side of the map for a weird quest that doesn't seem to lead to immediate sex" and the game isn't built around this sort of nonsense, this is not fucking skyrim.
So I have to call it a "not my fault" bug, if you play again and encounter the same situation please let me know with the steps that leaded you to it and I will track down the problem. Just for you :oops:

You have a point when saying people here comes from very different backgrounds and not everyone would catch the joke or find funny when I declare myself as the "Dark overlord of custom house party stories with just dialogue and no item interaction because I'm an idiot and can't make it work" (even if I am, damn it!) but it's very dificult for me to deal with this porn game moder thing in a serious manner, sort of misses the point for me.

vialta
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Re: [UPDATED][Complete Story] A man with a dream [0.8.3]

Postby vialta » Sun Jan 14, 2018 5:03 pm

I can't for the love of anything find the sleeping pills. Any idea where they could be?

Housepartyhard
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Re: [UPDATED][Complete Story] A man with a dream [0.8.3]

Postby Housepartyhard » Mon Jan 15, 2018 9:20 am

vialta wrote:I can't for the love of anything find the sleeping pills. Any idea where they could be?

Same place as in the main game, behind the door on the bedroom's bathroom


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