[Story Request] Date Night with Ashley

Requests for new Custom Stories or discussion of your new Custom Story ideas.
Forum rules
Please follow all Eek! Forum rules.
Post Reply
noobfromthe978
Posts: 68
Joined: Sun Dec 29, 2019 12:34 pm

[Story Request] Date Night with Ashley

I was wondering if anyone would be interested in creating a story I came up with. The link to the Google Docs file is down below.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1r5A ... sp=sharing
Catch your magic moment
Do it right here and now
It means everything
-Van Halen, "Right Now"
ttant
Posts: 987
Joined: Tue Feb 13, 2018 4:49 pm

Re: [Story Request] Date Night with Ashley

Interessting idea, i hope someone with enough csc can make it.

Anyhow, there is something strange for me in first lines:
"She’s out of town [...] She’s been out of the house a lot lately" + " I can smoke weed wherever and whenever I want"
It seems she has often the house for herself
But with next line: "I can’t with [....] in the house fucking like rabbits", it seems quite the opposite.
So what is the truth: does she or doesn't she have the house for herself ?
I think, first line should be change to something like "at first she was out of the house, but now, they stay in her bedroom all the time".
noobfromthe978
Posts: 68
Joined: Sun Dec 29, 2019 12:34 pm

Re: [Story Request] Date Night with Ashley

I guess I didn't think of that. Thanks for bringing it to my attention.
Catch your magic moment
Do it right here and now
It means everything
-Van Halen, "Right Now"
noobfromthe978
Posts: 68
Joined: Sun Dec 29, 2019 12:34 pm

Re: [Story Request] Date Night with Ashley

I wish I could make the story myself, but Unity just looks too complicated for me. Besides, like I said in my introduction to this forum, I'm more of an idea man. In the words of Jerry Springer, "Until next time, take care of yourself and each other."
Catch your magic moment
Do it right here and now
It means everything
-Van Halen, "Right Now"
ttant
Posts: 987
Joined: Tue Feb 13, 2018 4:49 pm

Re: [Story Request] Date Night with Ashley

Try to reach Kevin1995, puffdip or chimneyfish. Maybe one of them could be interested to have a scenarist.
noobfromthe978
Posts: 68
Joined: Sun Dec 29, 2019 12:34 pm

Re: [Story Request] Date Night with Ashley

I'll contact one of them. By the way, I fixed the discrepancies you mentioned. To quote George Carlin, "Toodle-oo, go with God, and don't take any wooden nickels."
Catch your magic moment
Do it right here and now
It means everything
-Van Halen, "Right Now"
Post Reply